Review by Smut
0:13-0:26: Not my cup of tea tbh, I don't like the fact that you have to approach the bump by using a packer.
0:27-0:44: Tried that one myself for fun once. Good looking execution and clever use of the hydraulics.
0:44-0:54: Solid grind.
0:55-1:09: This one looks fun to try, I've always enjoyed this kind of precisions.
1:10-1:22: The camera perfectly fits the music here, unfortunately I couldn't quite comprehend what has happened here.
1:23-2:00: This grind combo is obviously alot better than the first one. I like it.
2:01-2:10: Easy infernus bump, good use of the hydraulics again.
2:11-2:23: Another packer approach natural bump.
2:23-2:34: This was awesome, good job.
2:35-2:48: Pretty obvious one, doesn't look that hard.
2:48-2:57: Great natbump, no packer this time, so GJ.
2:58-3:06: Solid natural bump.
3:07-3:20: That is a Balsam style grind, looks kinda random.
3:21-3:35: Obviously one of my favourites in the video. Great air you got here.
3:35-4:08: Well deserved finisher, I love it.
Editing:
You did very well on the editing, I know how much of a struggle it can be to edit on a machine like yours. Nontheless I've enjoyed the camera movements combined with the freeplay adjustments, which perfectly fitted the song.
GJ tomiboy, keep it up and all the best for your future!