Industriekaufmann

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Industriekaufmann

Organizer: SentitneS

Editor: Alteryo

Stunters: Afterlife, alieNboy, Art, Bart, bLADE, Disciplo, draguN, exrer, FTO, Ltab, Mikeymouse, Named, Nem, Paull, promagic, Reynolds, Senti and WeeHee

Editor's note: A 24h collab organized by SentitneS. Originally I intented a completely different style for this video, but as I could not seem to get any further editing the video in said style I went for a style similair to the second part of the Phlegm.

Sentitnes statement: The intention of this 24h collab was to have fun, the same way I had fun while stunting for my 6h solo. That is why I allowed old stunts. In addition to that I wanted to use every stunt in the main part, thus forcing me to take a long song. Initially, I tried to go for a dark and fx-loaded editing, reminiscent of Rusch's editing, but I horribly failed at creating new ideas like I used to for videos like Hospitality or Recred, but at that time I was already at 25% and I didn't just want to throw it away, so I did what I always do when I am stuck.... I procrastinated and stalled the whole video. Until I got banned for procrastination, lol. In a way it helped though, because it forced me to start editing. So, I threw away the old idea of a dark and overedited video and when tried to go for something simple, quasi prudens simplicitas. The style is supposed to be a continuation of my Memento part.
Now the whole situation of me somehow being forced to edit might have led to some kind of rush and a few mistakes, but eventually I got it done and I am quite happy with the outcome even though, I concede, there is a lot of room for improvement. The song choice was also more or less forced because that was one of the few songs I had on my hdd that last long enough to fit in all these stunts.
As for the name, it was just a random association I had while editing the video. "Ein Industriekaufmann" basically is a sales man. The intended name was Hail SATAN! to express the 'edgyness' of the supposed version of the video. Check video down below for the only beta test rendering I have of version 1.
Anways, thanks again to draguN for helping me uploading and posting the video and thank you to those who participated. Next time I am not going to overestimate my ability to finish a video project in time in order not to get banned again, lol. Oh, and I am tired so excuse all those grammatical and orthographical mistakes.

Download: http://www.speedyshare.com/MQmEK/Untitled.wmv

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FTO (00:28 - 00:37)
Disciplo (00:37 - 00:43)
Ltab (00:44 - 00:59)
Afterlife (00:59 - 01:14)
Paull (01:14 - 01:27)
Disciplo (01:27 - 01:35)
draguN (01:35 - 01:44)
FTO (01:46 - 02:06)
alieNboy (02:06 - 02:14)
Bart (02:15 - 02:22)
exrer (02:22 - 02:30)
Art (02:30 - 02:36)
Senti (02:36 - 02:44)
Reynolds (02:45 - 02:56)
Mickeymouse (02:56 - 03:07)
Weehee (03:07 - 03:30)
Disciplo (03:30 - 03:43)
Named (03:43 - 03:50)
exrer (03:50 - 04:00)
Reynolds (04:00 - 04:21)
Mickeymouse (04:22 - 04:30)
Promagic (04:30 - 04:45)
alieNboy (04:45 - 04:52)
Ltab (04:53 - 04:59)
exrer (05:00 - 05:12)
Mickeymouse (05:13 - 05:18)
bLADE (05:18 - 05:21)
alieNboy (05:22 - 05:28)
Art (05:29 - 05:36)
Named (05:37 - 05:43)
Paull (05:44 - 05:51)
Promagic (05:51 - 05:59)
Nem (06:00 - 06:15)

[color=black]Editing: [/color]
[color=black]Soundtrack: [/color]

[color=black]Overall rating:[/color] ?/10


[Named]

Stylish edit, with relaxing song...really nice, congratz Sentitness and all guys with the work to do that 

[Ltab-]

Holy molly, didn't expected Zedd Gotta love dat song, man.
doing full review after taking a shower, brb.
btw glad you liked my stunts nígganerve <3

[disciplo]

wow I wasn't expecting to be in this 
here's my review 

Full review of Industriekaufmann
made by Disciplo

FTO (00:28 - 00:37): Great looking stunt, even though it's a pretty obvious spot it's a bitch to land.
Disciplo (00:37 - 00:43): Wow, epic stunt dude, seriously.
Ltab (00:44 - 00:59): Pretty well executed for a SA newbie. :3
Afterlife (00:59 - 01:14): Not really a fan of this type of stunts, plus I couldn't see the stunt clearly, but it's alright I guess.
Paull (01:14 - 01:27): Cool one.
Disciplo (01:27 - 01:35): You gotta spot landing such epic stunts, I almost came this time.
draguN (01:35 - 01:44): Pretty cool idea, but the grind wasn't exactly well executed in my opinion, still cool though.
FTO (01:46 - 02:06): Fun spot, I always try it when I'm riding around LS. Top job on that execution.
alieNboy (02:06 - 02:14): That bump must have been a bitch, so good job.
Bart (02:15 - 02:22): I've seen that landed quite a few times and in several different ways already so it wasn't really impressive to me, still good job on that execution.
exrer (02:22 - 02:30): It didn't look very good in my eyes, but the stunt itself was alright.
Art (02:30 - 02:36): The precision on that wood thing would have looked better in my opinion, still good job on nailing that grind.
Senti (02:36 - 02:44): It looked kinda sloppy to me, but that rotation gave it a nice touch.
Reynolds (02:45 - 02:56): Good job on landing it, I've tried that before and trust me folks, it's harder than it looks.
Mickeymouse (02:56 - 03:07): Cool execution.
Weehee (03:07 - 03:30): Pretty boring stunt if you ask me, and that execution only made it worse.
Disciplo (03:30 - 03:43): Alright now you made me came all over my keyboard icantevenesdasudiafuansiudsdifhasjdiaerq
Named (03:43 - 03:50): Cool spot, I'm sure you could have made a better execution though.
exrer (03:50 - 04:00): That was pretty nice, loved the way you "preced" it.
Reynolds (04:00 - 04:21): It doesn't seem too hard, but it looks cool.
Mickeymouse (04:22 - 04:30): To be completly honest, this has to be one of the worst stunts in the video. I mean, that runup was completly unnecessary and the stunt itself is older than my grandma, plus it's easy as hell.
Promagic (04:30 - 04:45): Cool one, good job on staying on that prec.
alieNboy (04:45 - 04:52): It looked pretty dull from this angle, but it was alright I guess.
Ltab (04:53 - 04:59): Cool little stunt, I liked the execution.
exrer (05:00 - 05:12): Great stunt, the grind could have been a little better though.
Mickeymouse (05:13 - 05:18): Cool old p2b, you could have landed the higher part though.
bLADE (05:18 - 05:21): It looked pretty cool.
alieNboy (05:22 - 05:28): Good looking natural stunt, that runup must have been a bitch.
Art (05:29 - 05:36): Great idea, and perfect execution. Well done.
Named (05:37 - 05:43): Bumping the fence would look better than curbbumping, but it was still cool and good job on landing the higher part.
Paull (05:44 - 05:51): I didn't like it to be honest, it looks pretty bad.
Promagic (05:51 - 05:59): Cool spot, seems fun to try.
Nem (06:00 - 06:15): It was alright, another stunt should have been picked for finisher though.

Editing: It was great as expected, you still have it man.
Soundtrack: Not exactly what I was expecting from Sentitnes, but it was enjoyable.

Overall rating: 8/10

[Paull]

lol, I didn't expected that.I loved this music and the atmosphere.Congratz to everyone with the work on that.

... and I'm too lazy to make a review now

[Ltab-]

Full review of Industriekaufmann
made by Ltaballs

FTO (00:28 - 00:37) Great stunt man, I'm thinking about a prec on those little things 8/10
Disciplo (00:37 - 00:43) I bet it was a pain in the ass landing this with a freeway, nicely done 9/10
Ltab (00:44 - 00:59) omgz u be pro at landed jump xddd 0/10
Afterlife (00:59 - 01:14) I never liked these stunts where you jump from a 10000ft roof to anything. But oh well 6/10
Paull (01:14 - 01:27) Wasn't it landed without the palm? a grind there could've been good though 7/10
Disciplo (01:27 - 01:35) It's always good to bring back the golden oldies 7/10
draguN (01:35 - 01:44) Dayum man, that was actually fucking amazing! Really loved it 9/10
FTO (01:46 - 02:06) The second bump was weird somehow (and I don't mean that looks illegal :p) but it was a nice one 8/10
alieNboy (02:06 - 02:14) Very nice one man, liked it a lot 8/10
Bart (02:15 - 02:22) Well, you know. It's Bart.. 10/10
exrer (02:22 - 02:30) Another awesome grind, would've been a lot cooler if you didn't used that packer, but I don't think there is another way without it, 9/10
Art (02:30 - 02:36) A typical stunt from that part of the map 8/10
Senti (02:36 - 02:44) Loved the twisted grind, too sad fence's short :c 7/10
Reynolds (02:45 - 02:56) Okay stunt, it wasn't impressive but yet it wasn't bad looking. 7/10
Mickeymouse (02:56 - 03:07) Why does everyone writes your name like the god damn Disney character anyways I liked it, but it's damn easy :c 6/10
Weehee (03:07 - 03:30) You horribly lamed the spot with that low driving and random pointless jumps at some points. 4/10
Disciplo (03:30 - 03:43) I don't usually like the stunts where you go jump from a high as fuck roof, but this one was very good! 9/10
Named (03:43 - 03:50) Cool infy stunt, simple and nice 7/10
exrer (03:50 - 04:00) I was like "grind it, grind it!" and then :< A grind could've been cooler imo, good one although 8/10
Reynolds (04:00 - 04:21) Same as your other stunt, 7/10.
Mickeymouse (04:22 - 04:30) Same as your other stunt, 6/10
Promagic (04:30 - 04:45) Holy frooker in the rooper (? that was a beast! I didn't expected the preci, totally raped me in the ass!! 10/10
alieNboy (04:45 - 04:52) I would've never seen that one lol, good work on this one too 8/10
Ltab (04:53 - 04:59) jeez u r gawd -10/10
exrer (05:00 - 05:12) Holy shit, amazing! 10/10
Mickeymouse (05:13 - 05:18) A bit better than the others just because it's a p2b lololol 7/10
bLADE (05:18 - 05:21) Loving the runup, very creative. 9/10
alieNboy (05:22 - 05:28) Simple one, 7/10
Art (05:29 - 05:36) Great one, kinda obvious in my eyes but nicely done nonetheless 8/10
Named (05:37 - 05:43) Shit! awesome combo there! 9/10
Paull (05:44 - 05:51) Didn't really liked it, it's not my style tbh. 6/10
Promagic (05:51 - 05:59) Kewl one man, 7/10
Nem (06:00 - 06:15) Is that cabbie stucked naturally? if yes 10/10! if not, well that brings the stunt a bit down, but I'd still give it a 8/10.

Editing: Lovely editing Senti, beautiful coluors and angles, everything placed in the right moment, just flawless editing 1337/10
Soundtrack: 10/10 it's one of a hell beat from Zedd, you have a nice taste, my man.

Overall rating: 9/10 Editing and soundtrack in my opinion are perfect! But a few stunts bring the video down :/ Regardless it was an enjoyable video! I'd totally join if there's a sequel.


Níggaballs out.

[Ѕcavenger]

Full review of Industriekaufmann
made by Scavenger

FTO (00:28 - 00:37) You had so much height at this spot. Looks weird. 7/10
Disciplo (00:37 - 00:43) Cool old stunt I still like to see. 9/10
Ltab (00:44 - 00:59) Again a cool classic. 9/10
Afterlife (00:59 - 01:14) Better would be if you grab trough the window. But still cool. 9/10
Paull (01:14 - 01:27) Top would be better. I still doesn't like this drops from top of random roofs. 7/10
Disciplo (01:27 - 01:35) Again a classic old stunt. 8/10
draguN (01:35 - 01:44) Cool stunt. But I think it's old with FCR. 9/10
FTO (01:46 - 02:06) Good job I think. Pretty easy but still looks cool. 9/10
alieNboy (02:06 - 02:14) Hope you didn't modded it. Rusch lost it to BigSmoke and he modded it so hard. 9/10
Bart (02:15 - 02:22) I lost this stunt. But it's okay. It's not so epic spot. I like the execution. 10/10
exrer (02:22 - 02:30) The second one was better. 7/10
Art (02:30 - 02:36) Cool spot. 8/10
Senti (02:36 - 02:44) You didn't stunt for long time it's okay. 8/10
Reynolds (02:45 - 02:56) That was epic. I was trying that too. 10/10
Mickeymouse (02:56 - 03:07) Old classic. 8/10
Weehee (03:07 - 03:30) Lame. 2/10
Disciplo (03:30 - 03:43) I wonder that nobody landed top from this spot. 8/10
Named (03:43 - 03:50) Great dropbump. Maybe will try for grind. 9/10
exrer (03:50 - 04:00) This is better than the first. BUT WHY NOT GRIND? 8/10
Reynolds (04:00 - 04:21) Lost this too. But the spot is obvious. 9/10
Mickeymouse (04:22 - 04:30) Old and easy. 6/10
Promagic (04:30 - 04:45) Great boost. I think it was a bitch to land the prec. 10/10
alieNboy (04:45 - 04:52) Cool stunt. 8/10
Ltab (04:53 - 04:59) Great. Better than the other rail. 9/10
exrer (05:00 - 05:12) I liked it. 8/10
Mickeymouse (05:13 - 05:18) Old classic. 8/10
bLADE (05:18 - 05:21) Not so great. But you are back! 8/10
alieNboy (05:22 - 05:28) Pretty easy. 7/10
Art (05:29 - 05:36) Well executed. 9/10
Named (05:37 - 05:43) Very nice spot. 9/10
Paull (05:44 - 05:51) Wow that was cool. It's almost luck to stay on this. 9/10
Promagic (05:51 - 05:59) Easy but I liked it. 8/10
Nem (06:00 - 06:15) Very cool spot. But not great finisher. 9/10

Editing: 9/10
Soundtrack: 9/10

Overall rating: This videotitle is weird for all germans. 9/10

[FTO]

@Nerve: Yer both of my stunts had been old already. The first one was done by Taz and the second by vmx.

@Scavenger:120ft on the opener. Shouldn't be difficult if you get a perfect bump imo. I had a lot of attempts of getting just 7,80ft after bumping as well.

Good video. The song deserves a more colorful cc tho.

[corevil]

already watched on YT, pretty good video, i loved editing too. 

[Reynard The Fox]

Solid video guys! Great job everyone. And concerning my p2b, it's old and I think it was originally landed by Vitalic if I'm not mistaken BobDylan as a guest stunt in Vitalic's timelimited solo Same way.

[VeganeBrodwärschd]

yay im unbanned, lol

thx for the reviews guys and also thanks again to hugo for posting the video

[alieNboy]

Awesome video, Bart stunt owned and few others awesome edit btw

stunts my stunts with clear cam

[Syny]

Good video. Anyone have a good stuff, specially Exrer, Promagic and Nem with the finisher.
Also cool editing Senti, the song is kinda boring but that's ok. Good job to everyone involved. 
Overall: 8,5/10.

[Asaaj]

Why did you get banned in the first place? ._.

Nice video and I am writing applications for that job

[Cookie]

The editing was really nice and I liked the CC, but I fell it was let down by the song that did not fit the video. The song picked up a bit at 3:30 and in less that a minute it changed again.

Most of the stunt were good but there seemed to be too far too many old stunts, regardless of it being a 24h video, there shouldn't have been that many old stunts imo.