Author Topic: B(l)ack in Business (Read 3693 times)

Tackleberry · « **on:** July 16, 2005, 12:06:37 PM »

IÃ‚Â´m back in business with "B(l)ack in Business".

Download it here:
TGA
Filefront

The video is quite long, almost 8 minutes. Therefore itÃ‚Â´s alot of stunts in it and every stunt is performed with the NRG-500. No more to tell you about, itÃ‚Â´s better that you see it instead of reading this crap... Maybe some stunts are "old", but IÃ‚Â´m new here and havenÃ‚Â´t seen so many movies. Have that in mind before you accuse me for anything.

IÃ‚Â´m quite new to stunting, so you, who proboably are more experienced, will see many mistakes in it. Please tell me stuff I should learn and please give constructive criticism. IÃ‚Â´ll be pleased with any comment.

With this movie I also want crews to discover me. Maybe IÃ‚Â´m still not good enough, but IÃ‚Â´m getting better every day.

Enjoy and thank you for watching!

GTA_Gangsta' · « **Reply #1 on:** July 16, 2005, 12:13:15 PM »

Awsome vid man. Just a few older stunts but no biggie.

Music 8/10

Stunts 9/10

Editing 10/10

Overall 9.2/10

good job keep up the good work.

Free Mike · « **Reply #2 on:** July 16, 2005, 12:14:13 PM »

This video was allright, but it got boring pretty fast. None of the stunts were spectacular, but they were all farly good. The grinds were basically just driving the bike up to the rail and getting stuck on the rail, no krails or fast grinds. The stunts that landed on billboards were uninspired and very basic for San An. The video could have been shortned from 8 minutes by cutting away from stunts faster and removing some of the filler type stunts. I would like to see more variety also in a vid. The video was pretty good for someone who is new to stunting though. Thanks for sharing.

DeathCobra · « **Reply #3 on:** July 16, 2005, 12:16:30 PM »

DLing,if youve got the skill,im sure TMS will want you.Or ZF or SAST.Maybe even XSA.

totallyrobot · « **Reply #4 on:** July 16, 2005, 01:40:09 PM »

Not bad at all, pretty good in fact, just not super good editing, nice to hear Turbonegro in a video.
and a couple of new spots, or new approaches to spots.

Tackleberry · « **Reply #5 on:** July 16, 2005, 02:07:50 PM »

Thanks for the comments!

I like the way Free Mike writes, itÃ‚Â´s stuff like that who makes me a better stunter. Thanks to you!

@GTA_Gangsta': YouÃ‚Â´re to nice, thanks you for the 9.2/10. Though I think itÃ‚Â´s way to high.

BomberBoy · « **Reply #6 on:** July 16, 2005, 02:15:00 PM »

DLING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

darklord · « **Reply #7 on:** July 16, 2005, 02:32:34 PM »

looks good for an first vid

Laketown · « **Reply #8 on:** July 16, 2005, 02:48:03 PM »

D/L...

defenitatly not bad for a first vid. the only thing is to get higher P2B, and more variety. like car stunts.

BomberBoy · « **Reply #9 on:** July 16, 2005, 02:50:36 PM »

i have no constructive criticism, because it looks like you got all the basics.

stunts: 10/10

music: 10/10

editing: 10/10

overall: 10/10

GJ, Keep going

GTA_Gangsta' · « **Reply #10 on:** July 16, 2005, 03:07:36 PM »

Quote

Thanks for the comments!

I like the way Free Mike writes, itÃ‚Â´s stuff like that who makes me a better stunter. Thanks to you!

@GTA_Gangsta': YouÃ‚Â´re to nice, thanks you for the 9.2/10. Though I think itÃ‚Â´s way to high.

9.2 to high this guy gave you a 10

anyway good job

Test Bear · « **Reply #11 on:** July 16, 2005, 03:14:32 PM »

It was alright, oyu seem decent at grinds, so work on those, also practice packer bumps.

Decent first vid, look forward to seeing more.

Tackleberry · « **Reply #12 on:** July 16, 2005, 03:32:13 PM »

Quote

...you seem decent at grinds...

Yes, the grinds were only supposed to get variation more variation in the movie. But now, afterwards, I think it would be better to skip them.

As I wrote, all the criticism you give will help me getting a better stunter, thank you.

Mr.Magic · « **Reply #13 on:** July 16, 2005, 03:36:59 PM »

Dling...

Can't Be worse than Pure Insanity.

Free Mike · « **Reply #14 on:** July 16, 2005, 03:48:22 PM »

Quote

Thanks for the comments!

I like the way Free Mike writes, itÃ‚Â´s stuff like that who makes me a better stunter. Thanks to you!

You certainly have potential and the fact that you learn from criticism instead of getting defensive about it will allow you to do even better and better in the stunting world. Glad I could help.