[C4D] Grimz Ones !

[Cocaine]

Grimz Ones !

[Infinity]

that was really ........................ boring

[VaNilla]

I'm not sure what you're trying to show with the video, but here's what I think. The background and the camera angles don't seem very focused, it doesn't really seem to have a purpose, so it's not very effective in that way. You can't really see the text either without really concentrating. If it's a logo or a video title, I'd focus on making something different, easy to read and exciting. Anyone can animate, clarity should come before flashy effects.

[PtRvY]

I really liked it, good job.