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Offline Joep

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Breaktime
« on: January 24, 2021, 06:39:38 AM »
Just a small video, All information in description
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=If8jTieQPCA

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #1 on: January 24, 2021, 07:29:30 AM »
I cant give you any advices on edit because I'm not an editor. The main thing for me in editing is that the video doesn't lose its speed and doesn't ruin the stunt with bad cam angle, cut or transition. I didn't see these bad things in your video, so I liked it.

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #2 on: January 24, 2021, 07:53:41 AM »
Try to imrove on the nametags, or at least use some other font. Apart from that I enjoyed the editing, some of the stunts were pretty well executed too :)

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #3 on: January 24, 2021, 08:22:42 AM »
>stunts: nothing special
>meanwhile in comments: it took 1 year to land finisher
 :hmm: do you miss old times when you were landing stunts in 10 minutes and enjoying life?  :|

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #4 on: January 24, 2021, 08:43:28 AM »
>stunts: nothing special
>meanwhile in comments: it took 1 year to land finisher
 :hmm: do you miss old times when you were landing stunts in 10 minutes and enjoying life?  :|

The stunts I used in  this video are from 2017/2018. I don't land old stunts anymore. :D

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #5 on: January 24, 2021, 09:43:54 AM »
Thanks for the edit Joep =) it turned out to look really cool. Although I think doing 5x4 hours instead of 20 hours in one run would be the superior way of doing it ^^ doing a 20-hour session is not only bad for your health but probably also bad for your creative process :D

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #6 on: January 24, 2021, 12:08:57 PM »
Jomra 10/10  :wub: really nice stunts

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #7 on: January 25, 2021, 05:03:54 AM »
General comemnts on editing:

-Pacing
-Timing of the effects (I liked 00:08 but it felt misstimed)
-Cam angles
-More cuts in in cam angles

I hope you continue editing. Maybe check out channels like:
https://www.youtube.com/user/Justthisgood

https://www.youtube.com/user/ECAbrams

another video which helps

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wv3Hmf2Dxlo

to help you along.
« Last Edit: January 25, 2021, 05:09:49 AM by Artifex »

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #8 on: January 25, 2021, 06:00:01 AM »
first 2 stunts were good!

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #9 on: January 25, 2021, 06:49:36 AM »
General comemnts on editing:

-Pacing
-Timing of the effects (I liked 00:08 but it felt misstimed)
-Cam angles
-More cuts in in cam angles

I hope you continue editing. Maybe check out channels like:
https://www.youtube.com/user/Justthisgood

https://www.youtube.com/user/ECAbrams

another video which helps

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wv3Hmf2Dxlo

to help you along.

Thanks for the good feedback!

I feel dumb myself, I forgot to mention I edit with Sony Vegas. So the tutorials aren't 100% usefull but the basics are good to see.

I will continue editing in the future.

-Timing of the effects (I liked 00:08 but it felt misstimed)
I also had to use the White color. Before I did notice it I already released the video :wacko:


« Last Edit: January 25, 2021, 06:53:39 AM by Joep »

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #10 on: January 25, 2021, 06:50:14 AM »
Try to imrove on the nametags, or at least use some other font. Apart from that I enjoyed the editing, some of the stunts were pretty well executed too :)

Thank you for the advise. I will grab this with 2 hands!  :rolleyes:

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #11 on: January 29, 2021, 11:24:44 AM »
great stuff actually even for lil and fun vid, continue to learn editing man, you have an potential, gl!

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #12 on: February 01, 2021, 05:48:50 AM »
I can't really comment on the stunts as I'm not sure what is hard/easy or old/new, but what I did see was some cool looking stunts, with some funky editing to boot. Found myself nodding to the music a lot.

Sweet lil video, can tell you had fun with the editing dude keep it up!

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #13 on: February 01, 2021, 06:53:38 AM »
Im simple man, i see Joep's video - i like.

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Re: Breaktime
« Reply #14 on: February 08, 2021, 07:20:58 AM »
sexy Rimano  :wub:

 

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