Author Topic: Poems (Read 880 times)

Rahi · « **on:** August 21, 2007, 12:09:56 PM »

Always

Waking up
He did what he always does
Didnâ€™t kiss his mom goodbye
Or say thanks to his pops

Walked to school/did what he always does
Had a snow fight with his friends
And asked about the night before
And how stoned he was

Entered the school
Did what he always does
Put his books up
And skipped first hour like he always does

He didn't see it coming
But it came so fast
Shouldnâ€™t had skipped today
A bullet to the chest he didn't expect

Waking up
He saw his parentâ€™s face
Blood everywhere
Always, always

EXTRA NOTES: You guys might know a song just like this.
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I will try to update this with new poems every now and then.

StuntKing · « **Reply #1 on:** August 21, 2007, 01:13:25 PM »

me loiks what he saw..

Eric · « **Reply #2 on:** August 21, 2007, 01:24:37 PM »

Always by Saliva, its...very obvious, but dude, needs a bit of structure work and getting the ideas in order, but its a great concept to tell you the truth, good job.

Rahi · « **Reply #3 on:** August 21, 2007, 04:14:07 PM »

no not really.

I was thinking of that song by POD when I wrote it in class.

EDIT: POD- Youth Of The Nation