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Offline VIPstear

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Fatum - fusion
« on: November 12, 2010, 03:57:14 AM »
Hey I'm going to present old... yes old fatum's solo - fusion. It was edit by adik16 but I was looking for replays when fatum let me edit my version his solo. I didn't use adik's guest. My fail :(. So... maybe you know this stunts, but this is my second edit. I'm learning edit so I present this vid to show my skill which is weak yet ;)
and sorry for my english

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VIPstear

Stunter:
Fatum

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fusion - fatum's solo

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Re: Fatum - fusion
« Reply #1 on: November 12, 2010, 04:28:58 AM »
The editing was pretty bad, the pan/crops were ugly & unnecessary, the overall flow was uninspired & disengaging, the effects were random & didn't compliment the music nor the stunt, you don't have to put an effect on every single beat, and the editing on the finisher was really annoying, the CC was kinda dull for me, but some people might like it. Work on your editing flow, try to combine the stunts/music with editing, so that it really compliments the stunts & has a nice pace to the vid, otherwise it looks like you just slapped some random fx on there, choose your colors more accurately, don't use something very bright or contrasted, if the CC is rather dull & monochrome & so on, just try to make it more engaging & interesting to look at.

The stunts were nice, some well-thought of ideas & executions,but I swear, if I ever see you putting a vehicle, even more so, a 3rd vehicle, to ease the landing, I'm gonna tear you a new one.

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Re: Fatum - fusion
« Reply #2 on: November 12, 2010, 04:35:14 AM »
The editing wasnt so bad, and the stunts were cool, tho I hate those 3 car stunts :x

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Re: Fatum - fusion
« Reply #3 on: November 12, 2010, 04:47:37 AM »
Are Linkin Park using guitar hero drums or what?

The stunts were stuntsey. Good job.


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Re: Fatum - fusion
« Reply #4 on: November 12, 2010, 05:31:01 AM »
The editing wasnt so bad, and the stunts were cool, tho I hate those 3 car stunts :x
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