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GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - V => V Videos => Topic started by: tufor on February 21, 2016, 09:57:55 AM

Title: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: tufor on February 21, 2016, 09:57:55 AM: This is my first stunt video from clips I've just recorded over since I've been playing. I would really appreciate anyone checking it out and any feedback you could offer :ajaja:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i4WgUtpr-6w (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i4WgUtpr-6w)
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: FrankInsanity on February 21, 2016, 10:13:53 AM: Nice video man, I liked the edit ;)
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: tufor on February 21, 2016, 10:29:41 AM: Quote from: Frank on February 21, 2016, 10:13:53 AM
Nice video man, I liked the edit ;)

ay thanks mate, that's reassuring to hear because I was definitely on the fence about that start. I thought there was only so much slow pan scenery I could do, so gave wavy lines a go :lol:
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: VaNilla on February 21, 2016, 11:21:33 AM: GJ :).
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: tufor on February 21, 2016, 12:14:16 PM: Quote from: VaNilla on February 21, 2016, 11:21:33 AM
GJ :).
thanks mate! :D
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: Rainbow on February 21, 2016, 12:18:52 PM: Nice spooky intro :P And very enjoyable video. But is there a reason why you have the HUD/minimap enabled and why you don't use races?
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: tufor on February 21, 2016, 01:38:09 PM: Quote from: Rainbow on February 21, 2016, 12:18:52 PM
Nice spooky intro :P And very enjoyable video. But is there a reason why you have the HUD/minimap enabled and why you don't use races?
thanks :D , do you think it went on a bit long? I was editing it and it felt like the intro lasted forever. I had the initial idea of doing like a freemode stunting video where there'd be a few clips of fighting off kurumas/insurgents but it was a little harder to get clips where it all happened quick enough for it not to be boring. It's still an idea I would like to do at some point. So pretty much all these clips are from freemode so that hud and radar is getting in the way a bit but oh well :rolleyes:
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: Rainbow on February 21, 2016, 02:18:21 PM: The intro wasn't too long ;)
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: SlayerUK on February 21, 2016, 02:36:48 PM: Cool for a first ;) Not too many old stunts and I like how you combo'd a lot of spots. Though you should have kept trying the last bump2bridge since technically you bailed the spot but keep at it :cc_detective:

Whats the song btw?
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: tufor on February 21, 2016, 04:15:43 PM: Quote from: SlayerUK on February 21, 2016, 02:36:48 PM
Cool for a first ;) Not too many old stunts and I like how you combo'd a lot of spots. Though you should have kept trying the last bump2bridge since technically you bailed the spot but keep at it :cc_detective:

Whats the song btw?

thanks mate! I didn't even think about having the actual bump2bridge landed stunt in there. I just bailed it like that and thought it was a cool way to end the video and stopped there, but it really makes sense to have it in landed lol. I guess that leaves something for the 2nd :lol:

the song is carpenter brut - roller mobster. I forgot to put it in description, thanks for reminding me :lol:
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: Afterlife on February 22, 2016, 05:41:10 AM: Pretty great solo for your first one. :P
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: NumeRo on February 22, 2016, 08:33:10 AM: Neat! i liked that video much more than the videos with "glinding" shitty stunts :a-cheer: keep it up!
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: Blaze on February 22, 2016, 08:39:24 AM: I thought the intro was a little long but it was enjoyable, felt like I was watching The Matrix or something :P I also thought some of the stunt runups were too long but apart from that it was real good. I liked the wallride up the building near the start and bump 2 roof ramp flip 2 billboard but as others said you should have landed the ender but it was still a funny ending. I'm not too well versed on V videos so sorry I can't offer more feedback but overall I really enjoyed it :cc_detective:
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: dab88 on February 22, 2016, 10:51:39 AM: Next time I make a stunt video I'm gonna make one more like this! :D

Most youtube stunt videos are beginning to look kinda same-y and it's boring. This is artsy, different, risky... and I like it a lot! Great work
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: tufor on February 23, 2016, 12:10:10 PM: Quote from: Afterlife on February 22, 2016, 05:41:10 AM
Pretty great solo for your first one. :P

ey thanks mate

Quote from: NumeRo on February 22, 2016, 08:33:10 AM
Neat! i liked that video much more than the videos with "glinding" shitty stunts :a-cheer: keep it up!

thanks mate, bikers all day

Quote from: Blaze on February 22, 2016, 08:39:24 AM
I thought the intro was a little long but it was enjoyable, felt like I was watching The Matrix or something :P I also thought some of the stunt runups were too long but apart from that it was real good. I liked the wallride up the building near the start and bump 2 roof ramp flip 2 billboard but as others said you should have landed the ender but it was still a funny ending. I'm not too well versed on V videos so sorry I can't offer more feedback but overall I really enjoyed it :cc_detective:

after having watched it a few more times, I was thinking the same thing about the runups. I guess I could do something for the next one where I could land that bridge ending and do some sort of flashback thing? Either way it leaves something for next one :lol: Thanks for the feedback, it really helps a lot.

Quote from: dab88 on February 22, 2016, 10:51:39 AM
Next time I make a stunt video I'm gonna make one more like this! :D

Most youtube stunt videos are beginning to look kinda same-y and it's boring. This is artsy, different, risky... and I like it a lot! Great work

wow that's a great compliment :D thanks very much!
Title: Re: tuforior first bike solo
Post by: Madmax on March 01, 2016, 03:29:13 AM: That was pretty good for a first video. I like the intro and the editing. The song choice was really great as well. You tied everything up nicely.

You've got good technique, great for a first video.
At 1:30, you shouldn't have cut to the next stunt so quickly. Landing a roof on a ledge makes it distinct, take an extra second to show it off after it's landed. You could have definitely landed that final stunt, especially since you didn't use the wheelie speed method.