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GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - San Andreas => SA Un-Modded Video Releases => Topic started by: JustAdam on September 19, 2015, 06:01:27 AM

Title: Dharma
Post by: JustAdam on September 19, 2015, 06:01:27 AM: (http://i.imgur.com/thiM691.png)

! No longer available (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EsAY2LNo2E4#)

Hi guys! today it's a release day of toty's new solo. I'm sorry for some bad effects, but I hope that overall it looks decent. I'm very particular about my productions lately, so i have to say that i already edited his solo long time ago and i decide to make this BETA version. IMO it's worth to share with you and to read ya opinions. Enjoy!

(http://i.imgur.com/jq2NHI9.png)
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: waNEr on September 19, 2015, 06:42:48 AM: 7/10 editing
5/10 stunts

like 70% of the stunts were good/sick spots but he lamed them. (landing lower part, not a good exec, etc.)
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: NEM on September 19, 2015, 07:31:57 AM: It feels like you tried to make it look like Beat edited it real hard, but honestly I couldn't pay attention to the stunts, I kept skipping through the video, because sometimes it felt like random cameras around SA without a point.

Actually I could compare it to any girl on facebook that has the need to put a smartass quote copied from google under every photo she posts, just to make it look deep.

You have some really good skills when it comes to editing, you just gotta learn how to use them properly..
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: waNEr on September 19, 2015, 07:35:38 AM: Quote from: Nem on September 19, 2015, 07:31:57 AM

Actually I could compare it to any girl on facebook that has the need to put a smartass quote copied from google under every photo she posts, just to make it look deep.

god my sides left my body
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: JustAdam on September 19, 2015, 07:46:33 AM: Well Nem got kinda right. But i'm not Beat wanna be. Even PK.

I wanted to create some decent video. I couldn't focus on it in the full entirety. I got some exams right now. Obviously I know how to use my softwares to create something big, but I don't need any attention in editing. Well that quotes used was kinda my idea, but it's fine that someone can think like: "It's from the web and to prove something".

Waner i think that you're too kind about that editing. :wub: :cheersad:
About the stunts: deserve for better than just 5/10.
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: NumeRo on September 19, 2015, 08:00:22 AM: my first thought "that was a stunt video ? i see chapter IV and i dont see any single stunt"
worst editing i ever seen sorry dude... and about stunts i cant judge because i dont see clearly any fucking stunt so...
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: Amaluna on September 19, 2015, 09:37:54 AM: Quote from: NumeRo on September 19, 2015, 08:00:22 AM
my first thought "that was a stunt video ? i see chapter IV and i dont see any single stunt"
worst editing i ever seen sorry dude... and about stunts i cant judge because i dont see clearly any fucking stunt so...
I second this. Could see a thing and the stunts that seemed cool, were cut off badly. Please get someone to re-edit this.
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: Arnax on September 19, 2015, 11:42:46 AM: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MC5b9ejmKsc (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MC5b9ejmKsc)
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: Mati on September 19, 2015, 12:06:11 PM: Quote from: ɐlıbı on September 19, 2015, 07:46:33 AM
Beat wanna be
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: ARS on September 19, 2015, 03:30:19 PM: You are good at putting effects and GFXing, synchronicity is good too, but i don't like how you show stunts. I just don't understand some stunts, because it was cutted or angle was bad. And the outro was too long imo. I understand you, it took a lot of your time to edit this video, sorry me, but it need to be re-edited. Here was a lot of good stunts, but i'll not comment them, just wait for re-edit.
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: PM on September 19, 2015, 06:42:18 PM: Really bad video

bro fuck bitch
http://youtu.be/_XGxooFyKmQ (http://youtu.be/_XGxooFyKmQ)
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: Herb on September 19, 2015, 06:50:30 PM: Editing fucked everything up. Toty you should get this re-edited by a competent editor :ajaja:
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: Erney on September 19, 2015, 10:57:38 PM: It was hard to watch these stunts with those cam angles..
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: JustAdam on September 20, 2015, 03:53:04 AM: Quote from: Herb on September 19, 2015, 06:50:30 PM
Editing fucked everything up. Toty you should get this re-edited by a competent editor :ajaja:

Well dude the exaggeration doesn't make me incompetent. I will not let you to insult my person here.
You can express your opinion if you don't like it, but being a veteran member dosn't makes you rights for crossing out acquired skills even if you cannot notice some improvements in my video and I bet that you didn't even watch the whole video.

Thank you for some more serious and problematic comments guys. I will be keep that in mind and I would not stay in the process of acquiring experiences. It makes me more stronger, and hated even in stunting now.

:) Have a nice evening!
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: NEM on September 20, 2015, 05:45:49 AM: what
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: morbidxxx on September 20, 2015, 06:30:49 AM: where are the polar bears?
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: toty on September 20, 2015, 06:34:50 AM: chilling with the anaconda at miami beach
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: NumeRo on September 20, 2015, 06:45:51 AM: Quote from: morbidxxx on September 20, 2015, 06:30:49 AM
where are the polar bears?
sawyer kill'em
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: jooker on September 20, 2015, 10:03:16 AM: Nice video mate! :a-cheer:
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: toty on September 20, 2015, 10:12:49 AM: Quote from: jooker on September 20, 2015, 10:03:16 AM
Nice video mate! :a-cheer:
thanks you
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: tomiboy on September 20, 2015, 11:49:29 AM: rise the gravity us wings only sometimes the force up
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: VaNilla on September 20, 2015, 11:52:10 AM: Jesus some of you guys are assholes. Anyway good effort but I think the editing got in the way of the stunts.
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: Minq on September 20, 2015, 11:57:29 AM: The editing wasn't bad at all, but you should work on your camangles to make the stunts more visible. I hope you can improve that in your next projects. Stuntingwise I expected much more <_< but it wasn't bad at all . Even some ideas suprised me alot. Thanks for the video :mellow:

Editing 7/10

Stunts 6/10
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: JustAdam on September 21, 2015, 05:12:34 AM: Thank you for your interest guys. :mellow:

Quote from: tomiboy on September 20, 2015, 11:49:29 AM
rise the gravity us wings only sometimes the force up
HAHA It was kinda pathetic i know. :lol: ;)

Quote from: NumeRo on September 20, 2015, 06:45:51 AM
Quote from: morbidxxx on September 20, 2015, 06:30:49 AM
where are the polar bears?
sawyer kill'em

Not in my video. You've watched another one probably.

Quote from: morbidxxx on September 20, 2015, 06:30:49 AM
where are the polar bears?

Well toty is a beast. He eat them.
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: NEM on September 21, 2015, 05:39:34 AM: You didn't get the reference alibi :Disgusted:
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: JustAdam on September 21, 2015, 05:42:37 AM: :(
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: toty on September 21, 2015, 08:59:56 AM: I need to finish lost, thanks to all the people who comment our video so far.
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: waNEr on September 22, 2015, 03:23:38 AM: Quote from: VaNilla on September 20, 2015, 11:52:10 AM
Jesus some of you guys are assholes. Anyway good effort but I think the editing got in the way of the stunts.

>stunts and editing weren't good and we call it out
>we get called asshole

Really? Is not like we post negative comments just because we want to make this 2 guys feel bad, we are just being honest.
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: Rust on September 26, 2015, 03:50:54 AM: Watched the first two minutes only. The Beat try hard made everything just messy and uncomfortable to watch; I got confused which caused me to close the window. Giving it a different perspective, I see you are good at GFXing but you need to exploit your skills to your own style and not try to copy someone else's work. I would say some positive suggestions, but I think everyone has pointed it out above. You have potential, but you found yourself failing way too hard at this... :unsure:
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: Named on September 28, 2015, 08:29:56 AM: Quote from: morbidxxx on September 20, 2015, 06:30:49 AM
where are the polar bears?

morbdixxx makes three posts a year, that's the first and he kicked ass :lol:
Title: Re: Dharma
Post by: NoLimit on September 30, 2015, 06:10:19 AM: Quote from: Nem on September 19, 2015, 07:31:57 AM
It feels like you tried to make it look like Beat edited it real hard, but honestly I couldn't pay attention to the stunts, I kept skipping through the video, because sometimes it felt like random cameras around SA without a point.

Sums it up pretty good. I couldn't see what was going on, and I actually thought it was one long intro and began to realize that it was the stunts themselves. Don't nerf the camera angles so hard, which is a shame because its really decent stunts. All the chapters part for nearly each stunt or song, I didn't get neither. Makes it more difficult to keep track of what you're trying and it turns out to this musical mess. It had potential, but due to the editing, it makes it pretty bland. I would much rather watch a "boring" editing with no effects, camera angles. But hey, we don't turn into warriors in one day, practice does it. Although it looked fun and I hope you improve in your next project.