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GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - San Andreas => SA Modded Video Releases => Topic started by: PK on October 28, 2012, 01:25:19 PM

Title: Schat
Post by: PK on October 28, 2012, 01:25:19 PM

Schat (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p0beVr-S2xM#ws)

Make sure to watch in HD - First, I was pretty much bored and picked out random stunts from Mugetsu monster pack. I would love to get feedback about the Cam Angles as I believe that I improved in it due to some inspiration from Shadowsniper <3. Forget the CC and the rest, I'll work on it later. So yeah! Feedback time!

P.S: If you came to bitch about something, gtfo. This is a test no modding issue.

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: MikeyMouse on October 28, 2012, 01:42:49 PM

Camera angles were pretty sweet, be careful of glitches though (0:43) only a small one, but still noticed it  :cc_detective:. Rest was great, just didn't like the song, but that's personal taste, good job man :).

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: Basium on October 28, 2012, 01:48:33 PM

That's a really good improvement, you've shown better.
The CC was ideal for night, the effects were simple and fitted well to the beats. One more thing and the most important one is the camera angles, try to avoid those bugs when you record a stunt and you pass through a palm or a wall then the camera angles should be constant with a minimum mouvement so try to get them horizontal and a little vertical to get a better view therefore I saw you did that from the sec 49, that was good. The rest was nice. Good job once again, I see you that you persevered that much.

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: Izzeee on October 28, 2012, 02:02:07 PM

i never thought that you are such a good editor, to be honest :D
it's a nice and enjoyable video. the colours could be a bit more decent, but the rest was cool. i really liked the intro, it was so clean and well done and gave me a good feeling... don't know why :lol:

8/10 at all ;)

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: Syny on October 28, 2012, 06:09:48 PM

Cool CC and cam angles, keep it up.  ;)

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: MxZz. on October 29, 2012, 12:50:50 AM

Since there wasn't that much effects, I'll say that it was ok. The main good point of the video was the quality that your new computer gives you. Otherwise, it was ok, yep. Keep it up.

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: Rainbow on October 29, 2012, 03:56:19 AM

Didn't knew you spoke Dutch? Do you?  :P

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: PK on October 29, 2012, 04:58:57 AM

Quote from: Rainbow on October 29, 2012, 03:56:19 AM

Didn't knew you spoke Dutch? Do you?  :P

I'm Arab, but my girl isn't. I just know a few words like Ik hou van je/schat/eten/etc. :lol:
Willing to learn more though.  :euro:

And for the rest of you, thanks a lot. More videos coming soon!  :happy:

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: A maid on October 29, 2012, 05:29:40 AM

It's okay to look up to people but becoming the person you look up to is just too much.

And it still looks like you recorded in 16:10 and cropped it to fit the 16:9 ratio to me, maybe it's just me but I think it'd look better if you fixed that with some motion tracking to stretch out the
screen a bit. And about the editing, it was okay but this song calls for a bit more action and I didn't feel any of that in the main part. Just a few lazy-looking screen cuts. Try not to have a very long runup in your video, that's something that can easily ruin things, and since you didn't suffer from a shortage of stunts you could've easily fixed that, though mistakes are what makes us humans.

The intro was actually very well done, but try not to be too much like Beat. :P Try to find your very very own style, experiment with that a bit and then make us gasp with it. Looking forward to your next vid.

P.S.: choosing a name like this for the video looks pretty goddamn retarded because Dutch is the ugliest language ever, but whatever floats your boat...

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: PK on October 29, 2012, 05:54:47 AM

Quote from: ｇｅηｇｅｔｓµ_ on October 29, 2012, 05:29:40 AM

It's okay to look up to people but becoming the person you look up to is just too much.

And it still looks like you recorded in 16:10 and cropped it to fit the 16:9 ratio to me, maybe it's just me but I think it'd look better if you fixed that with some motion tracking to stretch out the
screen a bit. And about the editing, it was okay but this song calls for a bit more action and I didn't feel any of that in the main part. Just a few lazy-looking screen cuts. Try not to have a very long runup in your video, that's something that can easily ruin things, and since you didn't suffer from a shortage of stunts you could've easily fixed that, though mistakes are what makes us humans.

The intro was actually very well done, but try not to be too much like Beat. :P Try to find your very very own style, experiment with that a bit and then make us gasp with it. Looking forward to your next vid.

P.S.: choosing a name like this for the video looks pretty goddamn retarded because Dutch is the ugliest language ever, but whatever floats your boat...

About the aspect ratio, I was pretty messed up with the render settings :P. I'll try to fix this issue more, and yup - the intro was inspired by Beat. But, this whole "cam angle" thingy is something which motivated me after SS showing me the original  recording of the old school collab. I've got a cinematic style when it comes to real life since I've been through a lot with it when it comes to crew projects - but GTA, it's a bit different lol.

Thanks for the advice master. :wub:

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: Rainbow on October 29, 2012, 10:53:04 AM

On the camera angle side (forgot to mention that), I didn't really like it. I don't know how to put this but it seemed like the camera's where not revolving around the bike or stunt. Damn this is hard to explain. Might be partly because of the aspect ratio but try to zoom in more with the ingame recordings and get the camera closer to the ground. All camera's are slightly elevated in this clip and that might be good for 2 or 3 clips but a whole video tends to get annoying to watch. It's all about mixing different camera's because the same over and over again gets boring. Colors and everything else was great but the camera angles let this down a lot in my opinion. Look at some of Beat's videos or any great editor in general (when it comes to GTA SA because VC is completely different). Just try to copy their angles to get a feel for it. Not saying this is THE method but it should help.

Title: Re: Schat
Post by: Afterlife on October 29, 2012, 11:08:43 AM

Wow, nice video PK, I enjoyed it. You have created a nice atmosphere on the video. :cc_detective: