Personally, for a first solo also being considered here. I thought it was enjoyable.Cheers for the feedback man, and if i'm honest I think the adrenaline of releasing this video got the better of me :lol: I totally agree with the flash/split screen issue, could have made it easier on the eye by toning down the intensity and instead of having a split screen effect, just have one side blurred so that it wasn't such a huge contrast and fucked with your head.
Stunts overall were very good for a first solo.
Editing was great except the harsh flashes (try blending them or using the opacity to make them less harsh) and the split screen bits. They fucked my head up as it was too much to handle. stick with the masking.
I enjoyed the music also, smooth move.
Overall i would say 8/10.
Try finding more creative stunts, doesn't necessarily mean big air or grinds, just impress us.
Good job!
nice colours and music, also liked the vc stuntsThanks :).
It was pretty good for a first, stunts, even though old, were executed quite nicely. 1:15 was fucking stylish as hell.
Personally, I think a more pale green/blue based color correction would be more fitting to the song, the grunge color was way overplayed & brought the vid down a notch. The pacing was nice & the vid did have a nice atmosphere, but the effects didn't really go anywhere, at some parts there was a real need of escalade in effects & intensity as the song grew more aggressive & dynamic. Overall the sync was nice & the vid was enjoyable, but you should work on your effects & try to conserve some of the original colors of the game.
For a first, it's a damn good vid, much better than what I did editingwise :lol:
I'd suggest trying a multi track CCing, you can get awesome CCs with the plainest of editing softwares. I usually do a ~27% opacity layer & play aroun with the compositing. Gradient & Bump maps are good for creating nice color mixtures, just keep the bump height at 0 & you can get a nice, intensive vignette that contrasts the colors, making it not as bland as it would be. A softly colored glow with minimal diffusion on the top layer can also do wonders :cc_detective:Sounds pretty good, I'll give it a try the next time I'm editing in SA :P
the split screen things werent very cool & the flashes were too sharp imo, just fade them in & out better, rest of the editing was coolAs I said earlier I totally agree, I rushed releasing it and should have taken a moment to alter the intensity of the flashes and come up with another way of showing the fast beats without increasing the tempo of the video.
You don't need that much runup if you're not radding since you will get your max speed pretty fast :cc_detective:Makes it a lot more fun though :P
Every first Solo almost looks like yours. Everytime the same easy stunts. Anyway keep stunting.Agreed, the stunting in this is below average, but i've only been stunting for about a month now, you can't expect me to be landing 200ft buildings already :lol:
Next time don't do what you did at 1:20 - 1:45 i had an envy to vomit ...:lol: i'll try not to do that again, and yep I do, no idea if that makes it look worse or something, thats just the settings that you start with I think.
Do you play with Fl-on ?
the song is cool iwanted to edit to teh song tooGo ahead, lets see what you can do with it :).