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GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - San Andreas => SA Un-Modded Video Releases => Topic started by: Cocaine on June 12, 2012, 05:13:14 AM

Title: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Cocaine on June 12, 2012, 05:13:14 AM
CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dE9cCnLBoDo#ws)
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: FTO on June 12, 2012, 05:15:37 AM
Tackleberry did a way better job on this song in my opinion.
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: HellGun on June 12, 2012, 05:33:13 AM
It would be a great stunt if you bumped the tree at 1:35 and landed the higher part.Or landed it with that double bump you already did.
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: PrzemOO on June 12, 2012, 05:37:33 AM
It's old by bumping the tree.
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: MxZz. on June 12, 2012, 06:08:24 AM
by bumsnudl in smbu if I remember right.
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Cocaine on June 12, 2012, 08:24:08 AM
Ow right, why did i post it in GTAS ? everybody here is only disliking
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: RedX on June 12, 2012, 08:38:49 AM
Showing every stunt twice is a horrible idea, the video had no flow whatsoever, and I didn't enjoy it as a whole. The stunts were great though, good job cw.
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Cocaine on June 12, 2012, 08:54:38 AM
idk what r u talkin about but i enjoyed that video even if i watch it 100 times. for me there was good flow, effects, stunts.

Go watch other videos like ex. Ten Thousand volts. He shows stunts twice to.
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Kukiel on June 12, 2012, 09:29:25 AM
I mean seriously, effects, camera works are important, no doubt. But essentially, what you're looking for in a video is an atmosphere going along the song and you failed miserably at it. It was okay though, nice stunts cw.

Any electro song would fit night time better. I chose random song, so it not neceserlly fits it but in my opinion still looks better than using your song.
http://youtubedoubler.com/?video1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DdE9cCnLBoDo%26feature%3Dplayer_embedded%23%21&start1=&video2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DjOyn1lSV-ZA&start2=&authorName=jahjasd (http://youtubedoubler.com/?video1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DdE9cCnLBoDo%26feature%3Dplayer_embedded%23%21&start1=&video2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DjOyn1lSV-ZA&start2=&authorName=jahjasd)
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Cookie on June 12, 2012, 10:12:15 AM
I agree that it is annoying seeing every stunt shown twice. I liked the colours, could watch a whole video like that, but does seem to lack more effects.
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: RedX on June 12, 2012, 10:32:33 AM
idk what r u talkin about but i enjoyed that video even if i watch it 100 times. for me there was good flow, effects, stunts.

Go watch other videos like ex. Ten Thousand volts. He shows stunts twice to.

It's not that you can't show some of the stunts twice, but you showed ALL of them twice, and you didn't do it in an entertaining way. A normal way to edit a stunt with two different clips is to f.ex: shoot the runup and the bump from the front, then in midair (time with music obv) you cut to a different view, which should change the look of the stunt (show some scenery you didn't see from the other angle or something) but this time you only show the last 1-3 seconds of runup, and show the bump again, and keep this angle till the end of the stunt. This way you've shown the exciting part twice, but you've left out the boring parts.

What you did was to show the entire sequence of each and every stunt from beginning to end, from two different angles. Throughout the vid it was like this: first time I see a stunt; exciting; but then the second time around I KNEW what was going to come, and that just makes the video boring to watch.. Surprising and entertaining the viewer is what editors are supposed to do. I'm not an experienced editor, and you're probably much more skilled when it comes to effects, angles, syncing and whatnot... but I have definitely made videos that are more enjoyable than this, so I hope you can take this advice from me. And for the record I have also shown stunts twice many times before, it's HOW you do it, not THAT you do it that matters.

Good luck with your next project ^^
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Cocaine on June 12, 2012, 10:56:52 AM
I agree that it is annoying seeing every stunt shown twice. I liked the colours, could watch a whole video like that, but does seem to lack more effects.

hmm, when i add lil bit more effects, then you guys say there were too much effects.. interesting guys,.

hmm atleast normal people like my videos on youtube, only guys who disliked is from GTAS if i watch statistics, dislikers gaay
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Kukiel on June 12, 2012, 11:13:05 AM
get your shit together, do some proper editing
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: DeathMazhine on June 12, 2012, 11:23:01 AM
edit nice
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Artifex on June 12, 2012, 12:28:12 PM
I agree that it is annoying seeing every stunt shown twice. I liked the colours, could watch a whole video like that, but does seem to lack more effects.

hmm, when i add lil bit more effects, then you guys say there were too much effects.. interesting guys,.

hmm atleast normal people like my videos on youtube, only guys who disliked is from GTAS if i watch statistics, dislikers gaay

People are just giving you constructive criticism. Don't be such an hard ass ^^
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Cocaine on June 12, 2012, 12:31:21 PM
if u give me critism, why is it so necessay to rate dislike.e
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Cookie on June 12, 2012, 12:38:23 PM
Who says people on GTAS are rating dislike on the video? Might just be other youtube users.

Just to explain what I said.
It just seems wrong to have heavy colours and not have more effects. No one (or less people) would say it is overedited as long as you don't add loads of effects... It's just about finding the right amount of effect to add and where to put them.
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: FELIX on June 13, 2012, 11:31:22 AM
I liked the video. The CC was cool and the efefcts were fitting. Only thing you should change is:
What you did was to show the entire sequence of each and every stunt from beginning to end, from two different angles
If you try to make interesting cuts within the stunt, the viewer gets more hyped about the stunts.  ;)
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Cocaine on June 13, 2012, 12:28:51 PM
Ok, thanks CW, i got some few stunts left from you. I'll try something interesting with them.
Title: Re: CLOUDWALKER - THIS IS A CALL
Post by: Syny on June 13, 2012, 01:56:21 PM
The editing was cool, with some nice effects and CC. The stunts were okay   ;)
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