GTAStunting

GTA Series => Grand Theft Auto - Vice City => VC Un-Modded Stunting Video Releases => Topic started by: Mr.Magic on December 31, 2009, 01:42:17 AM

Title: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Mr.Magic on December 31, 2009, 01:42:17 AM
Hey! I made this with the sole purpose of practicing editing so I would appreciate some constructive criticism. Post what you thought was good respectively bad, what could've been better etc. So, please, no asskissing comments this time. :rolleyes:

PldX HD Streaming & 720p .mkv Download:

http://pldx.com/movie/995/Underrated_Re-Edited/ (http://pldx.com/movie/995/Underrated_Re-Edited/)

Youtube:
Code: [Select]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P9Xf2EROSfo&fmt=22
I felt like I wanted to edit something and since I didn't have any kind of material to edit I decided to  re-edit Underrated. Why I chose Underrated was because looking back at the original video I thought that the editing brought it down a lot.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: TrYp on December 31, 2009, 01:53:44 AM
1st?
That was an awesome editing Magic! I kinda enjoyed watching this, good job :cc_detective:
I can't really give any critism, because I suck at editing, but this was perfect for me.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Helios on December 31, 2009, 02:02:14 AM
szent szar i excepted less but it was OUTSTANDING. best edit i have seen from you. for the edit its a 9.5/10 from me, because i didnt like that some places the clips got slowed. you rock :a-cheer:
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: fedex on December 31, 2009, 02:21:11 AM
enjoyable, nice re-edited one.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Enough on December 31, 2009, 02:23:08 AM
Nice vid re-edit pwn vid  :P
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Herb on December 31, 2009, 07:43:45 AM
I actually liked the original editing more. This one it seems like you just put random effects on it.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Asaaj on December 31, 2009, 11:56:40 AM
Great re-editing ;d
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: LeaR on December 31, 2009, 11:58:42 AM
pretty cool  :cheernutz:
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: RedX on January 01, 2010, 03:38:07 AM
pretty cool dude, a little too much shit going on for me personally though (flashing effects etc)
liked the camera angles, would love to see more. mostly good stunts, some mediocre

oh and you have to wrap youtube in these tags [noembed ] [/noembed ] if you don't want it embedded
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: JustCaus3 on January 01, 2010, 04:49:36 AM
i liked it pretty much, i don't remember the original editing but his edit looked sick.. good job dude  :ajaja:
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Flat Face on January 01, 2010, 04:58:54 AM
Didn't like the editing at all, very over edited.

Also please tell me that was an old song, throwing away a new song on a re edit is just stupid and selfish.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Hoff on January 01, 2010, 09:37:30 AM
Also please tell me that was an old song, throwing away a new song on a re edit is just stupid and selfish.
You serious? :lol:

Anyway, yeah it's the same song he used in the original video.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Noah on January 01, 2010, 10:07:50 AM
sexy edit and ozzim render settings  :a-cheer:
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Mr.Magic on January 02, 2010, 04:06:05 AM
flatface I hope you die choking on a cock you narrowminded, attention craving kangaroo fucking little cocksucker. Du e sämst, lilla kuksugare. Ni alla e horungar, jävla mobbade inavlade lowlife äckel. Ja bajsar snett på er, sitt här med ert lilla "forum" på 300 personer, spela ert 5 år gamla datorspel o slicka varandra i götthålen.

knulla er alla, d här e inte rage men ni alla e verkligen kuksugare.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Domovla on January 02, 2010, 04:25:57 AM
flatface I hope you die choking on a cock you narrowminded, attention craving kangaroo fucking little cocksucker.

/quote
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Flat Face on January 02, 2010, 04:27:04 AM
flatface I hope you die choking on a cock you narrowminded, attention craving kangaroo fucking little cocksucker. Du e sämst, lilla kuksugare. Ni alla e horungar, jävla mobbade inavlade lowlife äckel. Ja bajsar snett på er, sitt här med ert lilla "forum" på 300 personer, spela ert 5 år gamla datorspel o slicka varandra i götthålen.

knulla er alla, d här e inte rage men ni alla e verkligen kuksugare.

Luff you too. Crikey! This bloke's more off his rocker than an abo after a paint huffin session!
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Arnax on January 02, 2010, 04:45:39 AM
Great video, it was much better edited than original video.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: RedX on January 02, 2010, 07:35:00 AM
flatface I hope you die choking on a cock you narrowminded, attention craving kangaroo fucking little cocksucker. Du e sämst, lilla kuksugare. Ni alla e horungar, jävla mobbade inavlade lowlife äckel. Ja bajsar snett på er, sitt här med ert lilla "forum" på 300 personer, spela ert 5 år gamla datorspel o slicka varandra i götthålen.

knulla er alla, d här e inte rage men ni alla e verkligen kuksugare.

dude you are the definition of fag, grow the fuck up
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: BlayP on January 02, 2010, 11:05:27 AM
We all loose ourself sometimes just respect it thats all.
The re-edit was new fresh good stuff, enjoyed the shit as hell Miztah Magicah
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: SnowMan on January 02, 2010, 12:14:45 PM
yt dont work anymore, and the other stream laggs fo me o.o
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Noah on January 02, 2010, 01:24:16 PM
Just thought of something... The fact that this video has been edited twice makes it sorta overrated, right?


K, that didn't sound as funny as I had thought  :euro:
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: deviate on January 02, 2010, 01:25:53 PM
That was actually REALLY good, I liked it a lot. I'm not fond of the car stuck in rails shit but hey, whatever is your style.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: puzzLe on January 04, 2010, 01:57:13 AM
I actually liked the original editing more. This one it seems like you just put random effects on it.

Exactly this. :ajaja:
I liked the little holographic shit in the beginning though :3
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: PitBull on January 04, 2010, 05:05:43 AM
This video has been removed by the user.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: ofthemountain on January 07, 2010, 07:44:48 AM
Didn't like the editing at all, very over edited.

Also please tell me that was an old song, throwing away a new song on a re edit is just stupid and selfish.

You really are a vain, conceited little prick aren't you. I know you're such a big man now you're an admin, so you can pretty much be as much of a cunt as you want with what you say, but do you seriously just go around watching videos making sure they don't in some way infringe upon your own?

You're the reason no one comes here anymore except 14 year old morons who can't type, they are the only ones with any respect for you.
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: KillaMarci on January 07, 2010, 08:28:48 AM
Chill guys...

Okay you wanted some constructive critism so here you go  :D:

First of all, I liked the whole thing :P There were just some minor things I didn't like, such as:
- The video lagged a little, but maaaaaaybe that was just that weirdo streaming service.
- I saw that you used a lot of slow motion in the video...it just doesn't look good to me. You can do slowmotions when you have 100FPS material, but slowmotions with 30FPS recordings just look kinda bad in my eyes  :euro:
- That blue effect you used on the taxi stunt in the end was kinda weird.  :unsure: Didn't really fit the rest of the video somehow
- Just a little too much shaking throughout the whole video
- Sometimes thoose transitions you used felt a little weird (like 3:02) think theese transitions just dont really work with a fast song like that, simple fading wouldve been better  :ajaja:

That's it basically :P Can't think of anything else...you've definately improved your editing a lot  ;)

Theese are just some veeeeery minor things I noticed while watching




....damn I used too many smileys  :euro:
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Kenny on January 07, 2010, 08:40:35 AM
lol@u
Title: Re: Underrated Re-Edited
Post by: Knapman on January 07, 2010, 08:52:45 AM
lol@u
qft

-----

Now legit, in my opinion the original was way better, this one just had many random effects with lots of textures and the timing where you put in alot of slow-mos for the stunts didn't feel right. There were some really good spots in the video but the first one was overall way better.
SimplePortal 2.3.7 © 2008-2024, SimplePortal