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Title: One More try by White
Post by: KasT on November 30, 2009, 11:54:35 AM

After several attempts which failed in his oppinion,he came up with this,and asked me to post it here. I think it's the best one so far. Imo,he did a great job,but he needs your opinion too. Post some constructive criticsm.

Enjoy!


(http://i50.tinypic.com/28u087o.png)


and Thanks dude ^^

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: Davve on November 30, 2009, 11:57:23 AM

Looks pretty fine to me. Dont like the combination between that jumping guy and the background, just doesn't fit. Also, add a border.

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: Rainbow on November 30, 2009, 12:02:50 PM

the black at the top (center-top) is just too much, little bit of gray/white there would be better but rest is sweet =)

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: Xeno on November 30, 2009, 12:03:02 PM

better

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: Veno on November 30, 2009, 12:15:12 PM

i can`t see anythin1  :(

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: WhiteGTAs on December 01, 2009, 12:11:39 AM

 ;D im so happy.TY GUYS.I DON"T FAIL ANYMORE :cheernutz:
Still there can be improovements but for now im happy :jajaja:

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: vmx on December 01, 2009, 03:07:37 AM

Quote from: WhiteGTAs on December 01, 2009, 12:11:39 AM

;D im so happy.TY GUYS.I DON"T FAIL ANYMORE :cheernutz:
Still there can be improovements but for now im happy :jajaja:

Yea you do.

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: LeaR on December 01, 2009, 05:23:51 AM

oh i don't like it  :sleep:

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: torekk on December 01, 2009, 06:36:37 AM

I don't wanna destroy your happy feeling, but all together nothing in that image really matches together. The guy is like just hanging over the background, what is he doing? Floating in the air? The text is also just floating, come on dude. Spend more time than just 5 minutes on it. Work in the text, look up for some tutorials. That's called "blending", you just don't put things over each other. You need to give the image some eye catchers, and your's doesn't have any. Also look at that thing called "focus".

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: WhiteGTAs on December 01, 2009, 08:31:02 AM

ok ok i got it.most of u say these cuz im new on the forum.instead being a critic better be a friend :cheersad: . I know there are way's to improve but stop being assholes and flamers and start helping people.for example:instead saying that this sig sucks better say. I am sorry but u have to improve and try it again till u have something great.
Thats the problem with most of you

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: KasT on December 01, 2009, 09:57:28 AM

Quote from: WhiteGTAs on December 01, 2009, 08:31:02 AM

ok ok i got it.most of u say these cuz im new on the forum.instead being a critic better be a friend :cheersad: . I know there are way's to improve but stop being assholes and flamers and start helping people.for example:instead saying that this sig sucks better say. I am sorry but u have to improve and try it again till u have something great.
Thats the problem with most of you

yes,that's exactly what torekk did

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: torekk on December 01, 2009, 11:43:59 AM

Are you kidding? You wont get any better constructive critism here man. Go to a GFX forum then.

I told you where to improve and you're telling me an asshole. Fine, if it works like that for you, no one will ever help you. And don't expect people to show you how it works, do some research, these 5 seconds on google ain't hard...

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: __JREN on December 07, 2009, 05:09:09 PM

nice :P

Title: Re: One More try by White
Post by: WhiteGTAs on December 09, 2009, 12:22:10 AM

well...not quite but ty