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I felt the speed this time. Epic editing man good job. The end sucked donkey balls though. Why go through all the hazard and then shoot her in the face?
Awesome . I loved the introduction to the film, but after that the story really suffered. There didn't seem to be any motivation for the main character to be doing what he was doing, and I didn't understand why he shot the girl or why she was important. But like you said, story didn't seem to be the focus, it was just a gateway which allowed you to film your scenes. That's okay, but I think it you should have wrote the story first, instead of squishing one around predetermined set pieces. By doing that, you created a major narrative disconnect between the motivations of the character, and what he was actually doing. It didn't make a lot of sense.Aside from that the editing was really good, and the cinematography constantly kept me engaged. The slow motion ramp didn't have much impact on me (I felt that it was way too long), and it irked me that time passed disproportionally to the journey through Liberty City. But everything else was masterful. Overall this was an awesome video, but a more focused story would have improved it tenfold. Great job
Don't worry about the voice acting, it's simply great this time around!Also, loved the shots & the suspense, really cinematic & professional, oh and alsoTooL
sick video man i dont get it why you still dont have partnership on youtube
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