Author Topic: The Aventador Redemption  (Read 11287 times)

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Offline PtRvY

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #30 on: September 02, 2012, 05:01:27 AM »
I felt the speed this time. Epic editing man good job. The end sucked donkey balls though. Why go through all the hazard and then shoot her in the face?  :lol:
You didn't understand the story. :P

Offline PK

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #31 on: September 02, 2012, 05:37:33 AM »
Dawg, you need to head to Machinima for GTA. You could really get lots of attention to GTAS and to yourself. You've seriously put lots of efforts into this cinematography. It's really clear how hard it is if you've tried GTA cinema lol. And I would like to know why did he kill the daughter at the end since I didn't really understand the story. Great plotter, great editor, great voice actors. Great in everything you've done for this.

Simply, GTAS is amazed to have such a editor here.

Offline Felly_eS

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #32 on: September 02, 2012, 05:49:36 AM »
Pro

Offline VaNilla

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #33 on: September 02, 2012, 07:42:15 AM »
Awesome :D. I loved the introduction to the film, but after that the story really suffered. There didn't seem to be any motivation for the main character to be doing what he was doing, and I didn't understand why he shot the girl or why she was important. But like you said, story didn't seem to be the focus, it was just a gateway which allowed you to film your scenes. That's okay, but I think it you should have wrote the story first, instead of squishing one around predetermined set pieces. By doing that, you created a major narrative disconnect between the motivations of the character, and what he was actually doing. It didn't make a lot of sense.

Aside from that the editing was really good, and the cinematography constantly kept me engaged. The slow motion ramp didn't have much impact on me (I felt that it was way too long), and it irked me that time passed disproportionally to the journey through Liberty City. But everything else was masterful. Overall this was an awesome video, but a more focused story would have improved it tenfold. Great job :D
« Last Edit: September 02, 2012, 07:53:43 AM by Shadowsniper »

Offline Beat

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #34 on: September 02, 2012, 07:59:41 AM »
Awesome :D. I loved the introduction to the film, but after that the story really suffered. There didn't seem to be any motivation for the main character to be doing what he was doing, and I didn't understand why he shot the girl or why she was important. But like you said, story didn't seem to be the focus, it was just a gateway which allowed you to film your scenes. That's okay, but I think it you should have wrote the story first, instead of squishing one around predetermined set pieces. By doing that, you created a major narrative disconnect between the motivations of the character, and what he was actually doing. It didn't make a lot of sense.

Aside from that the editing was really good, and the cinematography constantly kept me engaged. The slow motion ramp didn't have much impact on me (I felt that it was way too long), and it irked me that time passed disproportionally to the journey through Liberty City. But everything else was masterful. Overall this was an awesome video, but a more focused story would have improved it tenfold. Great job :D

Next one will have a mindblowing story, mark my words :euro: But this is kind of a YouTube-type video if you know what I mean, I also made it in hopes that it'll go GTA-viral making sure its copyright free and so on.. and let's just say that the audience I'm aiming for is more interested in the action than the story. You probably get that.

Even though you think the story suffered, the context is there and it's enough to make sense out of everything I just didn't bother clarifying and spent the effort on the action instead ;)
« Last Edit: September 02, 2012, 08:04:12 AM by Beat »

Offline Davve

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #35 on: September 02, 2012, 09:55:25 AM »
Tool

5/5

Offline Reynard The Fox

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #36 on: September 02, 2012, 10:03:50 AM »
Tool

2/10

Offline Redfoxx62

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #37 on: September 02, 2012, 12:47:43 PM »
I love this video, it was fucking great. You're a epic editor Beat  ;D

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #38 on: September 02, 2012, 12:59:38 PM »
this was pretty cool. good work

Offline λli

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #39 on: September 03, 2012, 11:51:18 AM »
Don't worry about the voice acting, it's simply great this time around!
Also, loved the shots & the suspense, really cinematic & professional, oh and also

TooL

Yeah i agree with that!  :) everything is ok. <peace>

Offline playboyz

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #40 on: September 09, 2012, 03:05:49 AM »
sick video man i dont get it why you still dont have partnership on youtube  :wub:

Offline gesior7

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #41 on: September 10, 2012, 03:15:34 AM »
I didn't like the story. It was about killing innocent people, and it has sad ending.
I really liked car scenes and that voice, especially Russian performance. The action scenes and the voice acting gives the movie more professional feeling.

Offline MxZz.

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #42 on: September 10, 2012, 03:34:45 AM »
sick video man i dont get it why you still dont have partnership on youtube  :wub:
Copyrights I guess..

Once again beat, those car scene were the best I've ever seen!

Offline Eddie

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #43 on: September 12, 2012, 05:21:07 PM »
Now why you gotta go make me jizz in my pants again   :cheersad:

Offline SlayerUK

Re: The Aventador Redemption
« Reply #44 on: September 19, 2012, 12:37:20 PM »
Oh shit, you gotta shoutout by R* themselves on their newswire, very well done :cc_detective:.