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Detritus
« on: April 06, 2016, 07:30:01 PM »


DETRITUS
; waste or debris of any kind.

I wanted to edit a short video just to get some editing practice before editing the upcoming USS vid and I expected to get maybe 20 reps at a push but no lie I ended up with nearly 90 reps which was way more than I anticipated. Sorry to those who sent a high amount of reps (FIGHTER, Nem, Frank etc) that didn't get used since it's a short song and I didn't want a select few people to dominate the video however don't be dismayed as I'll be sending all the unused stuff to Max so he can use it in a project he's working on.

Stunt wise I'd say the stunts are pretty high caliber especially for a leftover video but I'm more looking for editing critique; I definitely overdid it with the motion blur and some of the angles are shoddy but any constructive criticism on the editing, angles, quality or just advice in general etc is welcomed. Speaking of quality I don't have a bigass monitor so I just recorded at 1680x1050, rendered at 1920x1080 and used Daffy's x264 tutorial to encode which I hope is adequate.

There were a couple of bugs with the editing, the effect on Fighters bump spin grind at LS skatepark should have been synced with the bump but I think either copying keyframes to reuse the effect or using my PC while rendering broke it (it should have also been there for a few others), the ender had two angles not just a straight fade along with some other export bugs so thanks Sony; I'd rerender it but I spent one hour rendering then another hour and a half encoding so fuck that. Also, the audio levels arent fucked/clipping, it's simply a lofi song named Bloodstains from the band Grave Babies so maybe drop your volume down. Overall I'm pretty happy with the outcome and a big thanks to everyone who sent stunts (whether they got used or not) and a thanks to anyone who watches and gives some feedback, cheers!


Detritus Streaming (watch on YouTube's website in 1080 if possible)  :jajaja:

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Detritus x264 337MB .mkv for those of us who still like to download videos (seriously whats up with people not posting download links anymore :unsure: )

https://mega.nz/#!C8sHxLSC!aOt5MkYnqpBfmpgkPledzJDarBEckvYm5vpZa9BImyI

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J.Mario
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ozibe
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Re: Detritus
« Reply #1 on: April 06, 2016, 08:27:54 PM »
First! Gotta leave a comment this weekend. :cc_detective:

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2016, 09:22:32 PM »
>makes fun of me getting credited on com vid
>then organizes a vid
>doesn't use my rep

kid we ain't friends anymore knowwhatimsayin'

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #3 on: April 06, 2016, 09:26:41 PM »
 Music, it's not my cup of tea, I mean I like these kind of music but those low pitched sound made my head scream
 Intro was superb
 Simple Tags liked them

 Nothing special with this edit, it wasn't bad, it was simple and enjoyable
 I want to see more from you buddy  :happy:

Maybe this helps you, maybe not:
  When I edit I always play the music 2-3 times and imagine the stunt vid (obviously with all stunts recorded at this point)

 SS Car Grind was... Oh man I have to change my pants
« Last Edit: April 06, 2016, 09:30:12 PM by FrankInsanity »

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #4 on: April 06, 2016, 11:25:03 PM »
The editing was fine, good use of timecyc and a good choice of song, tied together to create a unique ambience. Camera could be a little smoother though. Some clips had weird timings, as in start of the stunt was cut, then a really long view of post landing, ie the last taxi stunt.

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #5 on: April 06, 2016, 11:37:00 PM »
You should've used a better stunt from me :D I have no idea what I sent you but I remember a few decent grinds here and there. Overall a good collab, I thought this was gonna be just some leftover thing, but it felt far above my expectations, there were a lot of sick stunts, FIGHTER's stunts were outstanding obviously, I liked Ltab's grind tho, but the rest was noice too. Editing was enjoyable, nothing to complain about from my side.

GJ Blaze!

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #6 on: April 07, 2016, 01:05:25 AM »
ss's stunt looked awesome

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #7 on: April 07, 2016, 03:35:02 AM »
Nice quick video, wished you used more stunts and made it longer : >

#someoneorganizeanothercollab#




note: J mario's bike looked great into this vid.

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #8 on: April 07, 2016, 04:07:44 AM »
Nice edit  :ajaja: But what am I going to send my double 'grind'2prec to now

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #9 on: April 07, 2016, 04:25:20 AM »
Good vid, few standouts here and there (SS and Fighter). Who the hell is this "Odd Della Robbia" guy by the way?

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #10 on: April 07, 2016, 04:46:05 AM »
I remember seeing him in a couple of chinese videos

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #11 on: April 07, 2016, 07:03:45 AM »
Nice edit  :ajaja: But what am I going to send my double 'grind'2prec to now
Nice quick video, wished you used more stunts and made it longer : >

#someoneorganizeanothercollab#




note: J mario's bike looked great into this vid.

I'll be sending all the unused stuff to Max since he wants to edit a video to a Burzum song, apologies for not using more of your stunts (same to Nem) but don't fret I'm sure Max will make something awesome out of them :P Thanks for the comment on the bike too since I made that.

The editing was fine, good use of timecyc and a good choice of song, tied together to create a unique ambience. Camera could be a little smoother though. Some clips had weird timings, as in start of the stunt was cut, then a really long view of post landing, ie the last taxi stunt.

Thanks alot dude, some of the recording was a little messy hence the long parts of clips, will definitely try to fix that next time. Will probably have to drop my mouse sensitivity too, was just having some trouble with Fraps (sometimes it'd randomly just start dropping frames) so recording was giving me a headache.

Thanks for the comments and feedback, will be sure to take it on board for the next project I edit. I think ODR is one of those Chinese stunters who just appears out of nowhere with kickass stunts then disappears for another three months.



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Re: Detritus
« Reply #12 on: April 07, 2016, 07:04:25 AM »
I was kinda hoping to see a new finisher. Cool vid tho'

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #13 on: April 07, 2016, 07:18:20 AM »
Sweet video! Great stunts from rainbow, ODR and Fighter
Vanillas grind was Butter! that double barrel roll :wub: sick execution

The edit was really enjoyable and went great with the song!
Maybe try to decrease the shakiness of your cam and try to avoid touching walls, which will make the cam move towards the player
that's one factor I always watch out for
but anyways great job on that! would have loved to see a longer video

be on the lookout guys

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Re: Detritus
« Reply #14 on: April 07, 2016, 09:25:42 AM »
enjoyed it :happy:
Vanillas grind was Butter! that double barrel roll :wub: sick execution

 

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