Devoted Pattern - Paradigm

[GDL]

Hello guys!

I'm proud to present to you our first crew video called Paradigm. I don't really have something to say except we all worked hard to make the video as enjoyable as we could. I really reccomend downloading it  . Constructive criticism is welcome but please don't start flame wars here.

Enjoy!


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Devoted Pattern - Paradigm

Full Review by: <name here>

Intro:

Stunts:
0:35 - 0:44 1nsane - p2b 2 billboard:
0:45 - 0:55 Shifftee - Taxi 2 spin 2 boost:
0:56 - 1:03 Flippa - Natbump 2 crane precision:
1:04 - 1:10 maxXx - Triple grind:
1:11 - 1:18 Skuller - Bsm 2 roof:
1:19 - 1:22 Shifftee - Busted tires 2 ledge grind:
1:23 - 1:29 Maro - Packer 2 Wallkick 2 precicion:
1:30 - 1:37 Hugo - CSM 2 Wallride 2 Roof:
1:38 - 1:49 Genyus - P2b 2 roof:
1:50 - 1:59 Flippa - Side p2b 2 gap:
2:00 - 2:22 Sheeptea - Freeway ledgegrind:
2:23 - 2:34 GDL - spin grind:
2:35 - 2:44 Jubito - tank p2b 2 roof:
2:45 - 2:59 Sheeptea - tank double gap 2 docks:
3:00 - 3:04 Sorcery - grind 2 ledgegrind:
3:05 - 3:09  maxXx - p2b 2 roof:
3:10 - 3:19 Jubito - spin 2 double grind:
3:20 - 3:26 Maro - Tankbump 2 crane:
3:27 - 3:32 Sorcery - bsm 2 precision:
3:33 - 3:42 Skuller - hotring packer 2 treebump 2 parkinghall:
3:43 - 3:49 Sheeptea - drobbump 2 roof:
3:50 - 3:58 Shifftee - tankgap:
3:59 - 4:09 maxXx - packer 2 backbump 2 roof:
4:10 - 4:19 Shifftee - infernus packer 2 bump 2 roof:
4:20 - 4:29 Skuller - psm 2 stadium:
4:30 - 4:50 Hugo - bsm 2 roof

Outro:

Editing:

Overall:

Full review template thanks to Sheeptea

[Max_]

1st *watching*

E: Rly nice how I actually thought it will be  let the comments come 

[Christian]

second.

ebahti dobrite stuntove... Great stunts guise. :3 And nice editing, although Im not fan of Pink Floyd.

[Sheep]

already? watching

E/: turn out pretty well.

now, where is our section

Also we like to introduce GDL and Genyus for the official members now, it was kinda surprise for the video

[Asaaj]

Dling, high expectations

[MeetMyMeat]

I just did a research on the word paradigm cause I kept hearing it in a lecture o_O

wootching

Had a pretty great feeling to it. I didn't expect to see so many quality stunts. My favourite was jubito's combo, sick.

What I didn't like:
I think I saw one or two modded stunts
That effect with the blue/purple stripes you used for sync was ugly and unfitting.
The ending left... a hole. Something was missing. As if you did it like "Yay, no more stunts to record, time to end this thing."

[BG hitman]

holy mother fuckin shit 

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL I AM SO PROUD WITH YOU ALL
AND BELEIVE ME IF SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS TO DSS I WILL JOIN YOU 
TOO MANY STANDOUTS TO COMMENT 
LOST A FEW IDEAS

DP = VR

[KasT]

Holy shit guys that was insane! 

[Shifftee]

YAY ! DLING!

edit:// Great job everyone! I think it was brilliant after all.
We did a great job, WHERE IS OUR SECTION!? 

[The Big V]

Loved every single atomic part in this video O_O atmosphere... stunts .... songs. Cant say there was something bad in this video. Jubito and Sheeptea rocked and shocked all the way through the video. Many great ideas and great executions , also loved the tank stunts , got goosebumps watching them with these sweet cam angles. 10/10 , and if you ask me you deserve a section now 

Best of luck for the crew. If I was crewless I would've made audition 

[mehmet]

sick vid   

MAXXX! jubito  gdl(?)  and genyus(?) was the best
after the 3 dv vids why in gods name you change your crew ?

edit was sick too, but seen a lot better from gdl 

8/10

very good vid... but i waited way more

lost 2 stunts and 1 spot 

GOOD LUCK WITH THE  CREW! 

[Szuhos]

so..
my first reactiona t maxXx's p2b:
ASD:_AD.asd-ASD:AS_.asd-.... if i were in your place, i would have relanded that p2b
anyways, jubito stood out for me, hugo is a joke.


Hugo & maxXx:
you would be good wasteland heroes

[mehmet]

if you ask me you deserve a section now 

after all you did with dss you say this 


sorry for double posting
and again sick vid 

e: too slow

[Gavran]

This video was really awesome, you really have a nice style which I totally dig. I didn't feel like any stunt stoodout, but many of them were truly great. Some were just decent. I loved those grinds as well!

The editing was also quite soothing and clear, liked those simple effects.

Now, I do not wish to sound harsh or negative, but could I please see the following replays to erase any doubt that I may have:

1:30 Hugo's LC CSM
2:50 Sheeptea's Rhino Watergap
3:08 Maxxx' VC P2B
3:45 Sheeptea's Dropbump
4:00 Maxxx' P2B

Keep up the excellent work!

[Rainbow]

if you ask me you deserve a section now 

after all you did with dss you say this 

?


Anyway, this was sick! If someone makes a review template I am willing to do it 
Also Gavran, that tank stunt is clean